Monday 18 May 2009

Experiment 2 - feedback

Kheim Nguyen

Key strength of the scheme: some excellent form making that relates well to the chosen clients

Most significant weakness of the scheme: lack of natural light and choice of materials, need to work more with how light changes surfaces, and the texture of materials

Zumeng Zhang

Key strength of the scheme: well crafted axonometrics

Most significant weakness of the scheme: lack of light and shadow in the architecture and arbitrary choice of materials

Xiaojing Lu

Key strength of the scheme: the architecture uses mystery and ‘the hidden secret from’ well

Most significant weakness of the scheme: use of light, why purple try to use natural light colours, use a ramp not stairs 

Peili Ye

Key strength of the scheme: the architecture, well composed, excellent use of light, materials and texture, good posters. Cousteau’s lab the giant trap.

Most significant weakness of the scheme: keith campbells quote, wrong keith Campbell, 36 textures

Sisi Wang

Key strength of the scheme: the monumentality of the architecture, some interesting openings and the shadows that these openings create, the layout of the posters

 Most significant weakness of the scheme: the scanning of the axonometrics is lousy, a lot of unnecessary elements in the architecture

Najwa Tasin

Key strength of the scheme: the strong use of axis for the ramp, consistency of forms,

Most significant weakness of the scheme: light helps greatly to determine the mood, your use of light makes the labs feel cold and sterile, more care to scan in the axonometrics

Reginald Santos

Key strength of the scheme: quotes are good

Most significant weakness of the scheme: no light in the architecture, if there is no light then there is no shadow and there is no depth

Hong Qui

Key strength of the scheme: ramp in the large abyss

Most significant weakness of the scheme: the colour textures in the model are just a gimmick and detract from the spatial qualities of the project, more care with the axonmetrics

James Metcalfe

Key strength of the scheme: the captured images are well composed as is the architectural form and strong architectural spaces, good use of light

Most significant weakness of the scheme: the use of materials is inconsistent, the textures are drawn as light to medium light, the axonometrics lack a diversity of forms and thicknesses, depth is ok

Julia Luechtefeld

Key strength of the scheme: some excellent captured images of the architecture, powerful and and dramatic in a still manner

Most significant weakness of the scheme: strong solid carved out forms are broken apart by your use of materials

Alan Leones

Key strength of the scheme: the origami ramp

Most significant weakness of the scheme: the darkness, no light means no shadow and no materiality, the draft model materials and light are much better, the 36 textures are too varied to show light to dark

Harry Kavetsos

Key strength of the scheme: nice use of light in the architecture

Most significant weakness of the scheme: ramps vs stepped ramps, try using ramps next time, too many materials and textures in the architecture, it is not a case of more is better exercise control. The 36 textures are too varied to show degradation from light to dark

Seung Jin Jeon

Key strength of the scheme: consistent use of materials

Most significant weakness of the scheme: the froms have a thinness which is disturbing you need to work on this, it looks too much like folded paper, ok if deliberate and well crafted, but this looks like a mistake

Angus Hardwick

Key strength of the scheme: the drama of cousteau’s lab is excellent

Most significant weakness of the scheme: the scale of the chosen texture is too large, this breaks up the materiality of the excellent forms, try again using the texture at a smaller scale to see the difference 

Michael Diedricks

Key strength of the scheme: the 36 textures are well crafted

Most significant weakness of the scheme: no light in the model has flattened the spaces and sucked the life out of it. If you are unsure what materials to use then use only 1

Zhen Chin

Key strength of the scheme: the shear care and effort is to be commended, well crafted architecture consistent to a concept, clever arrangement, excellent axonometrics and good exploration of ideas

Most significant weakness of the scheme: apart from the tornado mass, the spaces are quite static

Richard Carter

Key strength of the scheme: good research into spaces, the cracks and crevices are very dramatic

Most significant weakness of the scheme: use of light is not as successful try using a yellow light not a blue one, openings that let light in should be thick and show depth, the thickness allows for reflected light as well as direct light, it is this combination that matters

Michael Berman

Key strength of the scheme: the falling cube

Most significant weakness of the scheme: lack of care in particular with the hand drawings

Divya Abraham

Key strength of the scheme: good investigation with the ramps

Most significant weakness of the scheme: scale of the texture is far too large, it needs to be smaller to gain repetition. Neater drawings please